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CHANDIGARH: Former Haryana chief minister Bhupinder Singh Hooda close aide Virender, who failed to appear before Rohtak police on Sunday in connection with sedition charge, has been directed to join investigation immediately. “We have told his (Virender) lawyer to join investigation immediately as the matter is quite serious,” Rohtak SP Shanshak Anand said on Monday. “He (lawyer) gave us assurance that Virender will soon join,” the SP said.
The main aim of this research was to investigate how children’s collaborative storytelling could be scaffolded through technologically mediated resources and how these resources can be made more effective by scaffolding around them. The benefits of providing children with resources, encouraging them to construct their own representations and to interact with each other while they make their story were investigated with respect to the quality of their subsequent storytelling.The first piece of work presented in this thesis is a qualitative case study aimed at exploring how the collaborative storytelling task could be resourced with and without technology, as well as the effectiveness of scaffolding around the technology through adult guidance, and whether the potential benefits could be maintained once the additional guidance was withdrawn. Although the study found that the (technology mediated and non technological) resources provided did not support for children’s engagement in discussion and storytelling, providing scaffolding around these resources was effective at promoting discussion and good collaborative storytelling.
Il s’agit du premier enfant du couple. Kim Kardashian a dj t marie deux fois et attendait que son deuxime divorce d’avec Kim Humphries soit prononc pour tre libre d’pouser Kanye West. Ces derniers temps, le couple avait connu des tensions, notamment cause de la promotion du nouvel album de Kanye West qui donnait Kim l’impression d’tre un peu dlaisse..
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